SLEEVE Thank you for your beautiful message. I wholehaertedly agree!!!
I am going to be honest with you hiphop is not my cup of tea. I can hear you put much effort in your music and apparently you love your own music. Which is fantastic. Loving your own music is a must to be successful. At the end you can only love your own music when you are in sync with yourself. Simply said love yourself the most than you can truly love some one else.
You must make mistakes otherwise you can not advance and you are keeping stuck. From failure comes progress. Without mistakes which lead to failure which lead to progress / growth.
Keep up the good work and I wish you much success!!!